I need some feedback ladies

DavidnAadynsMama

A long time friend of mine made this track. I think its really great. Hes looking for some feedback (good or bad) and I figured I could count on my pregly ladies to help me (him) out. Its his very first one and im actually shocked at how great it is. Check it out for me!

http://m.soundcloud.com/errick-harris/move-on?utm_source=soundcloud&utm_campaign=mshare&utm_medium=facebook&utm_content=http://soundcloud.com/errick-harris/move-on

DavidnAadynsMama

Bump

C'mon ladies

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ashley_smashley

I also enjoy that he isn't talking about gun, drugs etc..

I really like the chorus part but the rest of the beat is a little slow for me. Overall tho it's pretty good!

captivated

I love it! Hate the name though! Too corny and not unique.

DavidnAadynsMama

@armahnismommy @ashley_smashley thanks for taking the time to listen to it. I think for his very first one, its pretty good and im proud to see someone from my small town working towards something positive thanks again

DavidnAadynsMama

@captivated thanks for listening. He really appreciates all the feedback, positive & negative

ashley_smashley

I think that's awesome! Tell him good luck!

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DavidnAadynsMama

@captivated the name of the song "move on" or his silly "pshizzle" or both? Lol

captivated

Pshizzle!!

DavidnAadynsMama

@captivated I know lol thats been his nickname for like 13yrs. I dont like it either lol