charity?

owensmommy1213

I'm running a half marathon in Disney for the Ronald Mcdonald house of central Georgia. I was wondering if I was allowed to post the link and maybe u girls could proof read it for me and give me tips in raising more.money?

@mama_kat may I?

owensmommy1213

Well thanks! I haven't done much training yet but my first 5k is in 2 weeks, I may die.... I lost 1/2 my Achilles tendon to staph infection 3 years ago and haven't done any running since, so I'm so nervous . but I'm not trying to win, I'm trying to cross the finish line, preferably in an upright position! @kristaf22

mommyof3girls

I say... post ur link!!! Not sure if it's in the "rules" or not but the Ronald McDonald house helps soooooo many families. good luck!!!

owensmommy1213

http://www.firstgiving.com/fundraiser/dalashayes/team-ronald-disney-princess-half-marathon


here it is... if its not allowed, just let me know

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owensmommy1213

Thanks @mama_kat !

Kimberly4411

The beginning to the second paragraph confuses me, but other than that it sounds great! You are so strong and have some amazing reasons! Good luck!

owensmommy1213

Where it talks about the reasons and then jumps to what the RMH does? @Kimberly4411

Kimberly4411

Yes, maybe i'm just stupid lol

owensmommy1213

Oh no! I completely agree, its very confusing. but I'm not sure how else to word it. @Kimberly4411

Kimberly4411

When i get a chance i'll look at it again

Kimberly4411

Since you ended the first paragragh with a reason, you could start the second with "actually, i have many reasons to run. Did you know..." Or I may sound crazy but I have many personal reasons, one being...
I think what you're doing is awesome
Ps. I will not be offended in any way if you choose not to change it

owensmommy1213

I hate the way it sounds, but I couldn't figure out how to make it sound better. I have a crazy bad head ache right now & I'm mobile... so ill look when Owen goes down for a nap. thank you so much @kimberly4411 - its going to be a lot harder that I ever imagined. being with someone who doesn't support the running idea, doesn't eat healthy or anything is making it so much harder to get off my butt and do it.